The Eternal Fear

Hi everyone! I'm totally glad to be able to post the next post. This time, I wanted to drop one of my poems off here. Actually, I  don't often write poems and I'm more interested in writing some cool songs. But this time I only write it down for you all to read. To make it easier for you to realize by only reading it ,with no listening preparation, I thought it would be better to write a poem instead of a song then arranged and made more rimes. The name of this song is "The Eternal Fear" ; in fact, you see it as the title. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it. Further, I'm really looking forward to your comments to find out my weaknesses and problems so that I can solve them or probably you'd praise me therefore it'll make me more motivated to progress more poems.


This was the gun
he has gone
she's now alone
all alone in the dark

now it's the noise
scaring breaths
the torn shoes
rainy weather
she needs help
no other time to spare

I see the pain in her eyes
I know I'm not gonna
take it in stride
how I slept calm that night?!
muttering to myself why...?!
should they unfairly bear it as a force uh!

what's valued in dreaming
while others are hungry
they don't sleep coz
they need motivation for life
and that's what you don't, let them to find

cruel human kind side
doesn't care of others pain but
if they feel a bit sick, gosh!
don't let them even suppose a sorrow

this is my take of peace
I'm sharing it to see
how many of the listeners
would agree with  my speech

this is only an idea
I feel proud of you all
who would keep making
these kinds of takes as a belief